Anatomy of a Solid DM E-Mail
A rare e-mail, well done.
A rare e-mail, well done.
Every so often, I receive an email that’s so irresistible, so exemplary, and so well done, I’m compelled to critique it for you. The one at hand is from direct marketer Omaha Steaks. We can all learn from its email messages, especially the one illustrated in this column.
I’ll point out everything it’s done well so you can apply it to your email development. In a previous column I discussed how to make your email viral. This message is an example of a truly viral email campaign. It offers something that’s compelling to consumers: extreme value.
A great, value-laden offer is a start, but designing that message into a powerful direct marketing email that commands response is an art. The following exercise illustrates this point: Look at this message and see if you can find 16 ways Omaha Steaks cooked up a winner. Don’t peek at my list until you think you’ve found as many best practices as you can.
Click here and look at this message. Can find 16 ways Omaha Steaks cooked up a winner? Don’t peek at my list until you think you’ve found as many best practices as you can.
The 16 best practices in this email.
The Subject Line
Though not reproduced here, the subject line was: 3 DAYS ONLY save 64% plus get 3 Free GIFTS.
The Graphic
Copy Below the Graphic
I’ve received many promotional email messages from Omaha Steaks. They all follow the same formula: extraordinary value communicated in a clean, powerful manner.
Omaha gave us permission to critique this email but declined to disclose campaign metrics. I can only assume since Omaha’s been using this format for a very long time, it must outperform other email messages and must be Omaha’s winning control. From a design and content point of view, this email meets all my requirements.
You can read columns, books, and other expert sources about writing great email copy. Yet one of the most instructive ways to learn this craft is by observing what others do. If you’ve come across truly outstanding email messages like this one, send them along. Perhaps I’ll profile them in a future column.
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